HAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaa I love the game, please translate it into Spanish, it doesn't matter if it's with Google translate, I need it!!! (/T//u//T)/
I have MANY thoughts on this, but they are all my personal opinion. I see a game with so much potential, it clearly has a lot of love in it.
I think the 1st person angle (having it being narrated by the mc) makes things tumble when stuff happens that isn't supposed to be heard or seen by them. It can be hard to ignore that, for example, Mc is the one narrating Ren's bad experience with the cashier and later still thinks they may like each other. It also makes things seem slower cause it feels like mc takes quite some time to process stuff.
I have a bit of a problem with moth's video call. It's framed to interact with moth but enforce the idea that mc does not know moth's face, yes, but having been video calling an internet friend for years and them always aiming at the ceiling is just...?? took me out a lot. It would feel less unnatural if a videocall isn't brought up at all, maybe moth is shy and never shows his face so mc and him have only calls (no video) or he has a very old cheap cam, like, I can count the pixels on screen cam, to make it easier to disguise his appearance a bit. I think other options could work better to make interactions with moth feel less... forced by plot?.
Leon seems to be presented to be the more calm and perceptive friend, but in the date his actions (not as much his words) come up quite rude, pulling at your friend's arm taking them away from their date is really out of touch (unlike telling your friend that you are a escape route, that is good perceptive friend! I liked that). It feels like everyone is portrayed quite over the top to show Ren's reactions when it doesn't need to be so, worse case maybe is Teo.
Teo... makes a couple problems I have with the writing shine. Every second of his interactions with everyone took me out by the simple idea of "why would they keep this person around?". We all can understand the idea of having a friend who is a bit crass, a bit rowdy, but Teo is just awfully mean every single time he opens his mouth. He can be a friend that is crass and sometimes steps over the line that Ren can react to. For example as his confidence crashes seeing how mc reacts positively to something he can't embody with the character he chose (I can't be kawaii boy and a vulgar crude rude dude at the same time!) he can have an outburst that, in context, can be justified by anyone cause hey, Teo was being a bit of an *hole anyway, without Teo being an awful person.
And the little end of paragraph hearts confuse me a bit cause I think it is the intonation lol.
I understand this is a demo, but Leon talking like he knew about Ren when they ran into him and Mc's date came out of nowhere and really confused me, just like if Mc's fixation is referred as a web comic, a manga or an anime and what it is called.
I mean no harm with all that, it is only my perception of stuff.
With that out. Wow I would have never thought that something as small as having the character portraits blink would make a game with this mechanic feel SO MUCH more alive, that and the small "surprised jumps" and the sort make a kind of.. static experience feel way more dynamic, it is a great touch.
Wasn't expecting so many character portraits for a demo, that is so cool, so much work!
Love that Ren trows a bunch of things at the wall to see what sticks, trying to mold himself to Mc, dressing like her favorite character and so on. I really appreciate that a bit of his tattoos can be seen (under his clothes and covered by make up) just as the remnants of snake bites, and the hoodie that implies he had a waay different style (maybe the kind that would wear all dark and chains and know to pick a lock?).
All in all... I want to see what this evolves into, maybe I end up not being the target audience, but I can see this has a ton of love and wish it the best.
I’m glad I’m not the only one who noticed the dissonance in the narrative caused by writing in 1st person p.o.v.
I understand that scenes like for example the one with Olivia are needed so players 1) don’t get a “wrong impression” of Ren (aka assuming him flirting with someone else while being on a date with Angel), and 2) to drive home that Ren is Not A Good Guy behind his shy guy facade he puts on in front of Angel. But,, it really just doesn’t make sense narrative-wise, and once you notice it, it becomes hard to ignore.
Using 1st person p.o.v. also doesn’t work well when introducing new characters, because no one walks around and starts to introduce friends and co-workers (in their own mind, to themselves) each and every time they show up somewhere. And like, the introductions seem to take place in real time because Angel completely spaces out during those time, prompting the newly introduced character to ask if they were listening.
This issue could be fixed by switching to 3rd person p.o.v., but that would require a complete rewrite of all scenes…
That aside, I completely agree with you that this is game has soo many nice mechanics and gimmicks, especially considering it’s a 1-person-project!
On another note, I think the
Leon talking like he knew about Ren when they ran into him and Mc's date came out of nowhere and really confused me
issue is actually a bug. Leon is only supposed to recognized Ren on the 2nd Day if Angel brought him home on Day 1!
I didn't really notice the pov difference or care all that much about it to be honest, at the end of the day its a fantasy otome game so nothing is meant to be realistic. yeah, no one introduces their friends in their head like that, but nobody has the ability to glitch the text or have infinite time to make choices either. And I hope no one in real life is falling for real life murderers! But just like how movies have cliche first person "flashback" scenes or how novels have those long winded "character introductory" scenes, it's all there for the viewer's benefit and that's how I interpreted those scenes.
I'm probably going to get downvoted for this, but I personally I prefer the first person pov and don't think it should be changed. It makes it easier for me to insert myself into the MC's shoes and grow attached to the characters organically. Second and third person makes it feel like I'm reading about a predefined character in a novel rather than playing a character in an otome game, and doesn't feel as immersive or gives me that sense of attachment. Rather than feeling like I'm experiencing things as the MC, it's more like the narrator is forcing me to sympathize with them while I watch from the sidelines. If I had to make a suggestion, it'd be to take the scenes [such as the Olivia scene] and alter it in a way that works. Maybe MC only gets half of the conversation and the rest is waffled noise, or maybe make the text feature smaller font size like when Ren mumbles to signify that we're not supposed to be listening.
I'm in the other field for a few of the other comments OP [not the person I'm replying to] pointed out. Moth's video call seems realistic to me since I've been in similar situations where I've felt sweaty and gross from work and didn't want to show my whole face. The hearts at the end of the text I think suits the game's aesthetic, and is what I'd consider normal for an otome game to have a CTC indicator. Teo, to me, was perceived to be a character that's meant to be disliked by the community, and from what I've seen on the creator's socials, they intend for him to come across like an asshat as well. The scene involving Leon was already confirmed to be an overlooked error and has been fixed for the next update.
Everything else in OP's comment I agree on though! I loved the blinking and jumping animations just as much as I loved the immersive sound effects and sprite changes depending on the choices I made. Certain characters would react to the outfits I picked and Ren would make different comments after I replayed the game and got his bad ending the second time. Little details like these makes me appreciate the demo so much more, and I can only imagine how much time and effort goes into creating something like this. And the fact that it's one singular person giving this to us for free is mindblowing. I doubt the creator will see this, but just in case... Keep up the great work and take everything I've said with a grain of salt! This is amazing for just a demo and I cannot wait to see what happens in future updates. Also those 18+ scenes had me in a grip! Your writing style and syntax is on a whole other level I swear
It is up to one's taste, I do think it would work better in another POV but your suggestions of reworking some scenes would really make a difference (only hearing half of the conversation and other touches) and would help the game flow a lot better.
A sweet spot can be found between yanderecon's thoughts with the introduction of character and yours: make it so it doesn't take in-universe time. An idea can go through your mind in a second so the "thinking" of the character introductions can be done without Mc having had to space out for a while to get the idea to us.
Personally I think that's where 3rd pov would make it a lot easier to write those moments, cause getting that information out in 1st pov AND make it sound naturally takes a lot more effort.
I've been in similar situations where I've felt sweaty and gross from work and didn't want to show my whole face.
Yeah, don't we all sometimes feel like that, the thing if for years you just show the ceiling... it's just weird. Weirdness and dissonance can easily take readers out of the moment. I can hold my disbelief for so many things while reading a story, I love feeling in a story, but stuffs than don't correlate properly makes it feel like there wasn't a beta-read. I don't mean this a diss at the creator, I do think cutesai is doing something really cool and you have to be quite brave to put your work out for the world to see. I mean this as honest well intended critic.
Yes, I also believe the hearts as ctc are in part with the aesthetic, it just confuses me sometimes, easily a me-problem.
Cool that the Leon scene was identified and was just a bug.
Yeah I get that Teo is meant to be disliked, he is extremely dislikable, but in a way that is my point. As presented right now I can't see the thought process of the characters that make them keep the dude around and that takes me out.
Everything else in OP's comment I agree on though!
Got me a little chuckle that you only refer to my positive intake there jajaja. But yes, there are a lot of good things in this demo, the work can be seen. I'm curious to see how it evolves, I want to see to rest of this story. Cheers!
Someone already answered your question perfectly, but to clarify a bit more for others who may be curious: you can choose your own pronouns (he/she/they) and genitalia (penis, vagina, both, or ambiguous) separately at the beginning of the game!!
It's also mentioned in the itch.io description that you can choose your own pronouns, but I probably could've been more descriptive ^^;
Man that's craaazy, I love all the different options! How the MC is relatable and all the endings! I really hope Eleanor is alright or I'm gonna be salsa dancing Ren to death...or whoever hurts/murders her! Don't get me wrong though, I love Ren. He was kinda cringe at first, but it became hmm endearing after a little bit. And would love to break him out of wherever he's inside except if it's jail or a psychiatry. Definitely not out of a psychiatry, he needs to stay in that.
woahhh funky text(im new to itch.io if you cant tell)
I love this game SO much! You can tell how much love and time you put into this game! I love the story and characters!!! (Especially Ren and Violet) I also love that this game doesn't JUST focus on being erotic and such! All in all, this is my favorite Yandere Visual novel!! Thank you for creating such a lovely game! ^^
Hiya, so I've played it all on all possible routes and I just wanted to ask if it would be possible to make our character enjoy having a yandere obsess over them? Some of us are deranged, and it's a dream come true <3
Hello, i've played day 1 of the game and i love it, your game and art is rlly good :D! but for some reason day 2 doesn't work for me and when i download it, it's always the 1.0 version instead of 2.0. I've tried almost everything but it just wont work.. i have read comments with pl who have the same problem but it doesn't work? ( could be doing the wrong thing ). if anyone can help or knows the problem then do tell me ! ( i also have a rlly old computer so that might be the issue but either way ^^ )
Sorry for the late reply!! For some reason, "1.0" seems to be baked into the game's code (even after I've tried to rename it multiple times), so you might be playing the "2.0" version already!! If your GUI looks like the current screenshots and you can play Day 2, then you've downloaded the correct version!! Just ignore the 1.0 filename ;v;
Otherwise, make sure you've deleted any older versions of the game and removed any old save files from your Ren'Py folder. You should be able to redownload and play the updated version by then ^^
THIS is really SOMETHING, i'v been shocked first time playing this at 1:30a.m. i deserve it, but i really like this one. Sensitive. And, i mean yeah...that ex also my tipe so im really get into this game.
I really like this game a lot! Played multiple times and just now realize Ren covering up those black marks on his neck when day 2 comes around. Why hide it now when we saw glimpses of it in day 1? It's like a really pale faint lines on his neck. Is he dousing himself in so much makeup or something? Either way still love this game a lot and keeps me wanting more. Just love seeing bits and pieces of Ren from different options like a full story being pieced together from each choice we make to get the full picture of this person so called "Ren".
Thank you for your support!! It really means a lot ;v; ♡
There is a really big reason as to why Ren hides his tattoos (you can get an idea by reading between the lines of what Violet says in Day 1 and paying attention to what gets described in Ren's bathroom in Day 2), but it ultimately won't be revealed until later in the game ^^
....could you do a submissive ren scene plz? he's just too cute to resist. it's totally okay if you don't want to, just a fantasy from me. also-I LOVE YOUR GAME IT IS SOOOO ADORABLE AND CUTE!!!!!!! EVERYTHING IS JUST SO- OML I CAN'T EVEN. IT'S SO CUTEEEE
AHHHHHH!!!! THIS IS SO CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR GAME SMMMMMM IT"S SO CUTE AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Jesus, i cant wait for the game to be completed, the history is really engaging and visually quite beautyful, and the characters are nice, i luv ren T_T im obsessed with him ashdsajhdj i honestly think the game should get more recognition, it shows the effort and love that the game has <3 i would also like to know if the game will be in different languages, like spanish for example, BUT WHATEVER THANKS FOR ALL THIS, I LOVE U <3
aaaaaaaa thank you very much!! You got me in a puddle of my own tears right now ;v; <3
I have plans on having the game translated into different languages, but right now, I'd prefer to release more days/content before I make any big decisions ^^
hi im really excited to play this game, but as a trans person on the beginning screen the term hemaphridite is considered a slur, I understand you might not have known since langauge differences (which is okay and I hope you don't feel bad!!). I would suggest changing it to intersex or maybe just both. hemaphridite is strictly a term used with animals such as slugs or other animals with both sexual organs, its not a term to be used when talking or reffering to humans, i hope you consider this and dont feel too bad about it!!!! i cant wait to play thank you!!!!! ^w^
Hello!! Thank you so much for your honest feedback and kind words!! ^^
I originally used the term "intersex" in version 1.0, but I was told that it was incorrect and misleading. I was then advised by a few people from the intersex community to change it to "hermaphrodite" instead (since it was apparently more fitting and they even gave me examples of other video games using it. I figured if others were using it, it would be okay for me to do the same). But I wasn't aware that it was an offensive term or a slur until now T_T So I'm very sorry — especially towards anyone I offended or made uncomfortable by ignorantly using that word!! I still have a lot to learn about the intersex community, so this was very helpful for me ;v; /gen Thank you!
But yeah, at this point, I think I might just change it to "both" in a future update... ^^; Thanks again for your support and I hope you'll enjoy the better, updated version of 14DWY once it's released!!
It's perfectly okay!! thank you for taking the time to respond and consider my comment/gen! the trans and intersex communities are full of people with different experinces so dont feel bad for not knowing!! there isnt a guide to these types of things so dont beat yourself up about it!! I played a bit of the game and got two endings so far!! its extreamly pretty and i absolutely love it!! I hope in the future im able to support you and your games!! awesome work <33 I hope you have a great rest of your day/night
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My friend showed me this game and I'm in love
please make a patreon
HAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaa I love the game, please translate it into Spanish, it doesn't matter if it's with Google translate, I need it!!! (/T//u//T)/
i need it in spanish too <3 i love Ren
when will day 3 come out?
I love this man. Please, I'm begging you to complete it. Ahhhh, Ren, my Love! I NEED YOU! ^//^
But seriously, this is a really amazing game and I'm so excited to play more of it in the future! <3
best nsfw yandere game i've ever played fr
very gud ❤
The world needs more yandere games like these!!
day 2 make me like more about the game
I have MANY thoughts on this, but they are all my personal opinion.
I see a game with so much potential, it clearly has a lot of love in it.
I think the 1st person angle (having it being narrated by the mc) makes things tumble when stuff happens that isn't supposed to be heard or seen by them. It can be hard to ignore that, for example, Mc is the one narrating Ren's bad experience with the cashier and later still thinks they may like each other. It also makes things seem slower cause it feels like mc takes quite some time to process stuff.
I have a bit of a problem with moth's video call. It's framed to interact with moth but enforce the idea that mc does not know moth's face, yes, but having been video calling an internet friend for years and them always aiming at the ceiling is just...?? took me out a lot. It would feel less unnatural if a videocall isn't brought up at all, maybe moth is shy and never shows his face so mc and him have only calls (no video) or he has a very old cheap cam, like, I can count the pixels on screen cam, to make it easier to disguise his appearance a bit. I think other options could work better to make interactions with moth feel less... forced by plot?.
Leon seems to be presented to be the more calm and perceptive friend, but in the date his actions (not as much his words) come up quite rude, pulling at your friend's arm taking them away from their date is really out of touch (unlike telling your friend that you are a escape route, that is good perceptive friend! I liked that). It feels like everyone is portrayed quite over the top to show Ren's reactions when it doesn't need to be so, worse case maybe is Teo.
Teo... makes a couple problems I have with the writing shine. Every second of his interactions with everyone took me out by the simple idea of "why would they keep this person around?". We all can understand the idea of having a friend who is a bit crass, a bit rowdy, but Teo is just awfully mean every single time he opens his mouth. He can be a friend that is crass and sometimes steps over the line that Ren can react to. For example as his confidence crashes seeing how mc reacts positively to something he can't embody with the character he chose (I can't be kawaii boy and a vulgar crude rude dude at the same time!) he can have an outburst that, in context, can be justified by anyone cause hey, Teo was being a bit of an *hole anyway, without Teo being an awful person.
And the little end of paragraph hearts confuse me a bit cause I think it is the intonation lol.
I understand this is a demo, but Leon talking like he knew about Ren when they ran into him and Mc's date came out of nowhere and really confused me, just like if Mc's fixation is referred as a web comic, a manga or an anime and what it is called.
I mean no harm with all that, it is only my perception of stuff.
With that out. Wow I would have never thought that something as small as having the character portraits blink would make a game with this mechanic feel SO MUCH more alive, that and the small "surprised jumps" and the sort make a kind of.. static experience feel way more dynamic, it is a great touch.
Wasn't expecting so many character portraits for a demo, that is so cool, so much work!
Love that Ren trows a bunch of things at the wall to see what sticks, trying to mold himself to Mc, dressing like her favorite character and so on. I really appreciate that a bit of his tattoos can be seen (under his clothes and covered by make up) just as the remnants of snake bites, and the hoodie that implies he had a waay different style (maybe the kind that would wear all dark and chains
and know to pick a lock?).All in all... I want to see what this evolves into, maybe I end up not being the target audience, but I can see this has a ton of love and wish it the best.
I’m glad I’m not the only one who noticed the dissonance in the narrative caused by writing in 1st person p.o.v.
I understand that scenes like for example the one with Olivia are needed so players 1) don’t get a “wrong impression” of Ren (aka assuming him flirting with someone else while being on a date with Angel), and 2) to drive home that Ren is Not A Good Guy behind his shy guy facade he puts on in front of Angel. But,, it really just doesn’t make sense narrative-wise, and once you notice it, it becomes hard to ignore.
Using 1st person p.o.v. also doesn’t work well when introducing new characters, because no one walks around and starts to introduce friends and co-workers (in their own mind, to themselves) each and every time they show up somewhere. And like, the introductions seem to take place in real time because Angel completely spaces out during those time, prompting the newly introduced character to ask if they were listening.
This issue could be fixed by switching to 3rd person p.o.v., but that would require a complete rewrite of all scenes…
That aside, I completely agree with you that this is game has soo many nice mechanics and gimmicks, especially considering it’s a 1-person-project!
On another note, I think the
issue is actually a bug. Leon is only supposed to recognized Ren on the 2nd Day if Angel brought him home on Day 1!
I didn't really notice the pov difference or care all that much about it to be honest, at the end of the day its a fantasy otome game so nothing is meant to be realistic. yeah, no one introduces their friends in their head like that, but nobody has the ability to glitch the text or have infinite time to make choices either.
And I hope no one in real life is falling for real life murderers!But just like how movies have cliche first person "flashback" scenes or how novels have those long winded "character introductory" scenes, it's all there for the viewer's benefit and that's how I interpreted those scenes.I'm probably going to get downvoted for this, but I personally I prefer the first person pov and don't think it should be changed. It makes it easier for me to insert myself into the MC's shoes and grow attached to the characters organically. Second and third person makes it feel like I'm reading about a predefined character in a novel rather than playing a character in an otome game, and doesn't feel as immersive or gives me that sense of attachment. Rather than feeling like I'm experiencing things as the MC, it's more like the narrator is forcing me to sympathize with them while I watch from the sidelines. If I had to make a suggestion, it'd be to take the scenes [such as the Olivia scene] and alter it in a way that works. Maybe MC only gets half of the conversation and the rest is waffled noise, or maybe make the text feature smaller font size like when Ren mumbles to signify that we're not supposed to be listening.
I'm in the other field for a few of the other comments OP [not the person I'm replying to] pointed out. Moth's video call seems realistic to me since I've been in similar situations where I've felt sweaty and gross from work and didn't want to show my whole face. The hearts at the end of the text I think suits the game's aesthetic, and is what I'd consider normal for an otome game to have a CTC indicator. Teo, to me, was perceived to be a character that's meant to be disliked by the community, and from what I've seen on the creator's socials, they intend for him to come across like an asshat as well. The scene involving Leon was already confirmed to be an overlooked error and has been fixed for the next update.
Everything else in OP's comment I agree on though! I loved the blinking and jumping animations just as much as I loved the immersive sound effects and sprite changes depending on the choices I made. Certain characters would react to the outfits I picked and Ren would make different comments after I replayed the game and got his bad ending the second time. Little details like these makes me appreciate the demo so much more, and I can only imagine how much time and effort goes into creating something like this. And the fact that it's one singular person giving this to us for free is mindblowing. I doubt the creator will see this, but just in case... Keep up the great work and take everything I've said with a grain of salt! This is amazing for just a demo and I cannot wait to see what happens in future updates.
Also those 18+ scenes had me in a grip! Your writing style and syntax is on a whole other level I swearIt is up to one's taste, I do think it would work better in another POV but your suggestions of reworking some scenes would really make a difference (only hearing half of the conversation and other touches) and would help the game flow a lot better.
A sweet spot can be found between yanderecon's thoughts with the introduction of character and yours: make it so it doesn't take in-universe time. An idea can go through your mind in a second so the "thinking" of the character introductions can be done without Mc having had to space out for a while to get the idea to us.
Personally I think that's where 3rd pov would make it a lot easier to write those moments, cause getting that information out in 1st pov AND make it sound naturally takes a lot more effort.
Yeah, don't we all sometimes feel like that, the thing if for years you just show the ceiling... it's just weird. Weirdness and dissonance can easily take readers out of the moment. I can hold my disbelief for so many things while reading a story, I love feeling in a story, but stuffs than don't correlate properly makes it feel like there wasn't a beta-read. I don't mean this a diss at the creator, I do think cutesai is doing something really cool and you have to be quite brave to put your work out for the world to see. I mean this as honest well intended critic.
Yes, I also believe the hearts as ctc are in part with the aesthetic, it just confuses me sometimes, easily a me-problem.
Cool that the Leon scene was identified and was just a bug.
Yeah I get that Teo is meant to be disliked, he is extremely dislikable, but in a way that is my point. As presented right now I can't see the thought process of the characters that make them keep the dude around and that takes me out.
Got me a little chuckle that you only refer to my positive intake there jajaja. But yes, there are a lot of good things in this demo, the work can be seen. I'm curious to see how it evolves, I want to see to rest of this story. Cheers!
I'm so excited for more and the full 14 days, the plot is so good I've GOT TO STAY UPDATED this game was so much fun to play!
I LOVE REN
I absolutely loved it, the plot as well as the characters are just awesome.
it's so cute
This game has a lot of potential and I can't wait to see what direction it takes once it's fully released! Ren has my heart fr 🤭
Im like sooooo excited for the game to be finished!! ive been like addicted to this game and O-M-G the characters are like so cute!
this game was so good and the glitch part that made you stay at his house was so cool and im so excited for the next days to be released
I have a question, is mc female or does she not have special pronouns? I'm curious
you can make the mc a girl or a boy. You should have the option to pick your pronouns before you play
THANKS
Someone already answered your question perfectly, but to clarify a bit more for others who may be curious: you can choose your own pronouns (he/she/they) and genitalia (penis, vagina, both, or ambiguous) separately at the beginning of the game!!
It's also mentioned in the itch.io description that you can choose your own pronouns, but I probably could've been more descriptive ^^;
THANKS, I DON'T KNOW A LOT OF ENGLISH SO IT TAKES ME TO KNOW 💔 (I'm still almost new to itch.io so it's a bit hard for me, thanks again!)
woahhh funky text(im new to itch.io if you cant tell)
so happy to see the update:D
hearttttttttttttttt
Can't wait for next days to be released! I LOVE YOUR GAME!
I really really REALLY hope for the full game
I really don't know what to say, this is just perfect. I'm looking forward to the full game!
I love this game SO much! You can tell how much love and time you put into this game! I love the story and characters!!! (Especially Ren and Violet) I also love that this game doesn't JUST focus on being erotic and such! All in all, this is my favorite Yandere Visual novel!! Thank you for creating such a lovely game! ^^
Hiya, so I've played it all on all possible routes and I just wanted to ask if it would be possible to make our character enjoy having a yandere obsess over them? Some of us are deranged, and it's a dream come true <3
Hello, i've played day 1 of the game and i love it, your game and art is rlly good :D! but for some reason day 2 doesn't work for me and when i download it, it's always the 1.0 version instead of 2.0. I've tried almost everything but it just wont work.. i have read comments with pl who have the same problem but it doesn't work? ( could be doing the wrong thing ). if anyone can help or knows the problem then do tell me ! ( i also have a rlly old computer so that might be the issue but either way ^^ )
Sorry for the late reply!! For some reason, "1.0" seems to be baked into the game's code (even after I've tried to rename it multiple times), so you might be playing the "2.0" version already!! If your GUI looks like the current screenshots and you can play Day 2, then you've downloaded the correct version!! Just ignore the 1.0 filename ;v;
Otherwise, make sure you've deleted any older versions of the game and removed any old save files from your Ren'Py folder. You should be able to redownload and play the updated version by then ^^
I’ve reseted my entire computer completely and it didn’t work ( pretty sure all old files were gone ) but I’ll try again later you could be right T_T
THIS is really SOMETHING, i'v been shocked first time playing this at 1:30a.m. i deserve it, but i really like this one. Sensitive. And, i mean yeah...that ex also my tipe so im really get into this game.
*type
I really like this game a lot! Played multiple times and just now realize Ren covering up those black marks on his neck when day 2 comes around. Why hide it now when we saw glimpses of it in day 1? It's like a really pale faint lines on his neck. Is he dousing himself in so much makeup or something? Either way still love this game a lot and keeps me wanting more. Just love seeing bits and pieces of Ren from different options like a full story being pieced together from each choice we make to get the full picture of this person so called "Ren".
Thank you for your support!! It really means a lot ;v; ♡
There is a really big reason as to why Ren hides his tattoos (you can get an idea by reading between the lines of what Violet says in Day 1 and paying attention to what gets described in Ren's bathroom in Day 2), but it ultimately won't be revealed until later in the game ^^
I got the smutty ending from the first try ....... am I better than everyone ?😏
....could you do a submissive ren scene plz? he's just too cute to resist. it's totally okay if you don't want to, just a fantasy from me. also-I LOVE YOUR GAME IT IS SOOOO ADORABLE AND CUTE!!!!!!! EVERYTHING IS JUST SO- OML I CAN'T EVEN. IT'S SO CUTEEEE
Submissive Ren is kinda too much for my heart , but GOD that would be fun to experience.
The NSFW scenes don't have any impact on the game's storyline, so I'm not putting too much focus or attention on them for now ^^;
But if you want to see some submissive Ren, feel free to check out the 14DWY Tumblr!!
AHHHHHH!!!! THIS IS SO CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR GAME SMMMMMM IT"S SO CUTE AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Started it today and can't wait for day 3 to be released!! :)))
OMG hes sooo cute i cant((
ill be waiting for next days <33 its rlly cool
BROROROROOO i love ren sm i cannot wait for more days.. ^3^
Thank you sm for the support!! ^^ ♡
Jesus, i cant wait for the game to be completed, the history is really engaging and visually quite beautyful, and the characters are nice, i luv ren T_T im obsessed with him ashdsajhdj i honestly think the game should get more recognition, it shows the effort and love that the game has <3 i would also like to know if the game will be in different languages, like spanish for example, BUT WHATEVER THANKS FOR ALL THIS, I LOVE U <3
aaaaaaaa thank you very much!! You got me in a puddle of my own tears right now ;v; <3
I have plans on having the game translated into different languages, but right now, I'd prefer to release more days/content before I make any big decisions ^^
I get it, thanks for answering! <333
Hi, I want to know if there will be an android version pleasee~
Hello!! This has been answered here a few times but no, there won't be an Apple/Android/Mobile version ;v;
Try an app called Joiplay. There are a few versions of it that can run different versions of Ren'py.
hi im really excited to play this game, but as a trans person on the beginning screen the term hemaphridite is considered a slur, I understand you might not have known since langauge differences (which is okay and I hope you don't feel bad!!). I would suggest changing it to intersex or maybe just both. hemaphridite is strictly a term used with animals such as slugs or other animals with both sexual organs, its not a term to be used when talking or reffering to humans, i hope you consider this and dont feel too bad about it!!!! i cant wait to play thank you!!!!! ^w^
Hello!! Thank you so much for your honest feedback and kind words!! ^^
I originally used the term "intersex" in version 1.0, but I was told that it was incorrect and misleading. I was then advised by a few people from the intersex community to change it to "hermaphrodite" instead (since it was apparently more fitting and they even gave me examples of other video games using it. I figured if others were using it, it would be okay for me to do the same). But I wasn't aware that it was an offensive term or a slur until now T_T So I'm very sorry — especially towards anyone I offended or made uncomfortable by ignorantly using that word!! I still have a lot to learn about the intersex community, so this was very helpful for me ;v; /gen Thank you!
But yeah, at this point, I think I might just change it to "both" in a future update... ^^; Thanks again for your support and I hope you'll enjoy the better, updated version of 14DWY once it's released!!
It's perfectly okay!! thank you for taking the time to respond and consider my comment/gen! the trans and intersex communities are full of people with different experinces so dont feel bad for not knowing!! there isnt a guide to these types of things so dont beat yourself up about it!! I played a bit of the game and got two endings so far!! its extreamly pretty and i absolutely love it!! I hope in the future im able to support you and your games!! awesome work <33 I hope you have a great rest of your day/night
MAN, I LOVE THIS GAME GRGRGRGRGRGR, IT'S ALL THANKS TO THE CREATOR. I CAN'T WAIT TO THE NEXT DAY
Wahhhh thank you so much!! ^^
This game is like a brain worm in the best possible way!! If you like dark and steamy games download it yesterday. Chefs kiss to the creator!!!!
JKDGSKGGK Not da 14DWY brainworms /silly
But thank you very much for the review!! I'm glad you enjoyed the demo ^^