yes i absolutely saw the bad end jumpscare coming. did i still shriek? also yes. "don't worry MC, i won't let you get my bad ending! ^^" my ass. he straight up gave me heart palpitations
if he did something to plant goddess violet and work wife elanor...jail.
seriously though, i really liked this! you scattered hints that were clear enough for us as players to spot the warning signs, but subtle enough for us as the character to overlook or flat out not notice.
also, i'm not sure where to put spelling errors and bugs, so i'll leave them here for now!
Well, it Looks like I'm going to be busy for the next few weekends...
I think "Looks" isn't supposed to be capitalized
Figuring that was my queue to leave
I think "queue" is supposed to be "cue"
Jokes on him though,
I think "Jokes" is supposed to be "Joke's"
dangle off of his arm half-hazardly
I think "half-hazardly" is supposed to be "haphazardly"
And whatever this is:
can't wait to see more of this game! i'm sure the fact that ren's favorite item is a sledgehammer won't come back to haunt us
I could've sworn I replied to this comment ages ago???? (feel free to ignore this if I did ^^:)
But I'm glad you enjoyed the demo! And thank you so much for pointing out the little grammatical/spelling errors! In hindsight, I probably should've ran the script through Word or Grammarly beforehand fskdhsdjgs :') But I've already implemented the script changes and a fix to the error you received, so it should be released once Day 2 is completed!
This game is honestly amazing!! It's everything I love perfectly bundled together <3 I'm going to gladly keep supporting and awaiting updates I think I've fell in love haha
OMG! I'm addicted to Ren. And that sex scene was *chef kiss*. Don't get me started on the dialogue in that scene. The art is gorgeous and the chracters are amazing. I don't even write reviews but I'll do it for your game. So freaking good! I can't wait for another update.
This game is phenomenal! The art is already the most gorgeous I've EVER seen and the music fits every scene so perfectly!
And Ren, whoo, he's a cutie alright and I love that he's just a good actor and hiding a mess of stuff. He's literal eye candy and I love lookin' at 'em! Even when he's being creepy, it's irresistible ♥
There's also a LOT of game already here for just a demo, I'm only half sure if I got all the endings, the full game is gonna blow people away!
Everything is so wonderfully written, and natural, and fun to read. Excellent game, I will make a video of it on my channel soon as it was requested by a few people. Excellent work! I hope more people get to play this!
I have finally uploaded my playthrough! I broke it into about 3 parts that I'll upload every couple days cuz I hate making hour long videos, I hope you enjoy and that I've done your wonderful game justice! I will admit that I didn't record the 18+ option at ALL because Youtube scares me, but I played it on my own and OMGosh that is so beautifully written!! And the picture of Ren (fans self) LOVE IT!
Speechless! Literally speechless over how good this demo is! And it's very promising too
First of all, we are already given a variety of choices on how close we allow Ren to be, and I love it. Second, the art style is gorgeous and so well-made! Characters already all look quite unique. Third, I like the small details that you did. Like how different characters can say different thing, depending on what we wear (like when Ren is taken aback by MC wearing alternative style).
And of course Ren! Ren is just great. I am soooo interested to see different routes with him! I can't wait to see his reaction, once he realizes he got intimate with MC the next day :D Overall, this is a very good beginning, and I am just burning up with wait :P
Wahhh, thank you!! ♡ I'm glad to see that you were able to pick up on all the little titbits scattered throughout the demo, as well as the unique dialog for the styles you pick ^^ If I remember correctly; Violet will say something about your outfit if it's cute/trendy, Elanor will say something if it's professional/casual, and Ren will say something if it's alt/comfy
But thank you once again for your kind comment! I'm slowly chipping away at Day 2, so hopefully you won't have to wait long! ^^ ♡
These kind of games are my guilty pleasure *chef kiss*, I can barely find games like these that have dark content; besides a few. this is really well made from my perspective, the art to the effort of branching out the paths (since vn are a pain in the ass to deal with, especially the coding part). Take your time making it, and don't rush it. But Ren exudes so much mystery, bcuz there are some parts got me thinking he might be more than what he seems on the surface and that he isn't from where I think he is supposedly.
aaaa thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed the demo! ;v; Honestly the branching paths were a pain for me to try and connect dialog-wise, since some choices wouldn't flow as seamlessly as the rest (i.e. the MC stating that they don't trust Ren, but then immediately choosing the option to share a bed with him like?? jkakfkd bestie do we trust him or not? LMAO) ^^'
But thanks again for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the demo! ♡
Wow, i want more of Ren! Loved the switch of personality and the art... reaaly good!! The smut part was very on point. Im very interested in how the story will go on. Cant wait the full 14 days!!
I'm slowly working on it!! I can't make any promises but maaaaaybe in 2-3 weeks if I'm able to put aside enough time for it ^^ Creating sprites and writing dialog is a lot more time consuming than you'd think lol
I'll also be posting updates on twitter soon if you're interested in seeing the progress!
Absolutely loved this, can't wait to see what the future days have in store. You weren't lying about the eye straining text though, kinda leaves me with a bit of a headache at times 😅.
aaaa sorry to hear that >.< I can look into adjusting the font/text size/text jitter in the near future!! Can I ask what specifically made it difficult to read? Just so I'll know what to work on ^^
SHEEEESH this is really good!! The art is SO pretty and Ren is, admittedly, very cute, despite the many red flags he raised LMAO and that sex scene is 69/10. But aside from Ren, Violet and Eleanor are really pretty! Too bad something bad will most likely happen to them :,)
I'm genuinely very excited for the finished game, I'll be wishing you all the best with the development! :D
But thank you for your kind words and support!! It's nice to see people liking the other characters as well (sorry Ren lmao) ^^ Maybe I'll let them live... Maaaaaybe.
I'm an absolute sucker for yandere guys, and I feel there is so much to Ren! I've been looking for something like this, and it's done so well! You did an amazing job on the demo and I really hope to see more of this because I just have to know how this ends for MC <3 not to mention the backstory for Ren and your other characters lol
Thank you so much! ♡ I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed the demo! You'll be able to learn more about Ren and his backstory within the later parts of the game, so look out for that ^^
wahh thank you!! If you ran into any difficulties opening the game, feel free to let me know the specifics so I can update the instructions shown on the download page! ^^
Gay people that prefer to bottom exist too, you know... And MC can be female here, so I am already very happy and very grateful that we are given opportunity to have different pronouns
Thank you so much!! I can definitely add a feature in the near future that lets you choose whether you want to top/bottom if people are interested in that ^^
Thank you for the suggestion, and apologies for the late reply!! ♡
I have been looking for more stories similar to this for a while. There is not many of them out there, that's for sure. This story, I absolutely love it and cannot wait for the rest to be released. Good job and good luck on the rest!
I love this game already! The art, the music, the story (and Ren of course).
All the subtle details in conversations that might seem normal, but you just know they are not. How for some reason you feel so comfortable and safe with him from the start, despite not knowing anything about him.
Also caught an error when you choose share the bed -> call out/move the pillow -> never mind
Other than that, can't wait for a full release to spend all 14 days with Ren. Thank you so much for such a wonderful demo.
Thank you for your kind words — and for catching that error! I'm not sure how I missed it during playtesting ^^' But I'll be sure to take another look at the code and see if I can find/fix the problem ASAP. Thanks again!!
This is really good so far, I love it! I especially like the personality chosen for the MC and the mysterious vibes Ren gives off. Thank you so much for making it!
By the way, it's cool to meet someone with the same name. Only difference is that mine is taken from my alias Saikotic ^_~
AMAZING, INCREDIBLE, WONDERFUL, I AM OUT OF WORDS.
please im so in love my heart is so full i cant wait................. this is so good T^T !!! ren is..... wow. i mean, i already fell for him. how could i not????? the boy is a walking red flag but who cares??? from now on, im colorblind!
everything about this game is beautiful, the art, the ost, the colors... im totally in. take everything you want my beautiful dev, my soul, my money, everything is yours, i just want this game finished in my hands so i can finally be happy. now seriously, thank you so much for the hard work and for share this masterpiece with us, can't wait for the full thing! ♡_♡
LMAO WE ARE NO LONGER PERCEIVING COLOUR 😤✋ the red flag is now our national flag, and Ren—
But fr, thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the demo, and your support means the world to me :'D Day 2 should be out soon! I'm still working on the sprites and updating the old CG art since my art style has changed a lot since then :')
I LOVE THIS GAME and i find it funny how even tho I know completely that Ren is crazy obsessed with us (and is definitely the guy who broke into our house and is behind the recent murders in town...) I JUST CAN'T BE MEAN TO HIM OR REFUSE HIM HE'S SO IRRESISTIBLE 😫 LMFAO
And I find that the MCs ever changing opinion of him aligns with mine too somehow lmfao we're going from "damn he's kinda creepy" and then just forget all about it a second later and go "man he's so cute 😍" lmfao 😭
And that 18+ scene... 😳 IT WAS SO IN DEPTH HONESTLY I WAS SHOCKED BECAUSE I DON'T USUALLY SEE IN DEPTH ONES IN GAMES It was written so well I am in love! And that cg?!?!?! 😳
Overall, I COMPLETELY ADORE THIS GAME, The art is immaculate and the writing is so good! I am now also deeply enamored with Ren <3 I enjoyed this game so much and I'm looking forward to see more! <3
I have been replaying the demo several times now because its just THAT good.
The game is really well writen and I love those small parts in the text that show how obsessive/possessive Ren is and...well... Ren is just too irresistible to say no to! I just can't wait till we have 14 days with just him!
aaaaaaa thank you so much!! ♡ I'm glad you were able to pick up on his subtle yandere tendencies! I was worried that it might've been too vague to notice -- but at the same time, I didn't want Ren to come on too strong with it lmao ^^'
I'm glad you enjoyed the demo though! Thank you for playing it!
You did just the perfect amount of Ren's yandere tendecies for the very first day (especially considering that he will become even more obvious yandere in the upcoming days)
You did a trully wonderfull job, and thank you for your hard work! ღゝ◡╹)ノ♡
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let me tell you something...the sex scene with Ren...
You don't know how happy I am that this is free.
Does Ren have snake bites? or are those moles/beauty marks?
He has snake bites :0
I believe the creator confirmed it on her Tumblr/Curious Cat?
Ohhh, thank you so much!
Like the person before me said, Ren has snake bites (along with a few other piercings)! But he takes them out whenever he visits the MC ^^
hey google how do i pin a comment
Utterly poggers game so far, looking forward to more days!
yes i absolutely saw the bad end jumpscare coming. did i still shriek? also yes. "don't worry MC, i won't let you get my bad ending! ^^" my ass. he straight up gave me heart palpitations
if he did something to plant goddess violet and work wife elanor...jail.
seriously though, i really liked this! you scattered hints that were clear enough for us as players to spot the warning signs, but subtle enough for us as the character to overlook or flat out not notice.
also, i'm not sure where to put spelling errors and bugs, so i'll leave them here for now!
can't wait to see more of this game! i'm sure the fact that ren's favorite item is a sledgehammer won't come back to haunt us
I could've sworn I replied to this comment ages ago???? (feel free to ignore this if I did ^^:)
But I'm glad you enjoyed the demo! And thank you so much for pointing out the little grammatical/spelling errors! In hindsight, I probably should've ran the script through Word or Grammarly beforehand fskdhsdjgs :') But I've already implemented the script changes and a fix to the error you received, so it should be released once Day 2 is completed!
Thanks again! <3
hi! Sorry to jump in; do you have a time period that day 2 might be completed in? I’d love to download it as soon as you do!
This game is honestly amazing!! It's everything I love perfectly bundled together <3 I'm going to gladly keep supporting and awaiting updates I think I've fell in love haha
wahhh thank you sm!! I'm happy to hear that! ;w; ♡
OMG! I'm addicted to Ren. And that sex scene was *chef kiss*. Don't get me started on the dialogue in that scene. The art is gorgeous and the chracters are amazing. I don't even write reviews but I'll do it for your game. So freaking good! I can't wait for another update.
aaAAAaaa brb crying real quick ;v; I'm honoured to be your first review!! I don't think I follow anyone on here yet, so you can be my first lmao
But for real though, thank you so much for the kind words! ♡
This game is phenomenal! The art is already the most gorgeous I've EVER seen and the music fits every scene so perfectly!
And Ren, whoo, he's a cutie alright and I love that he's just a good actor and hiding a mess of stuff. He's literal eye candy and I love lookin' at 'em! Even when he's being creepy, it's irresistible ♥
There's also a LOT of game already here for just a demo, I'm only half sure if I got all the endings, the full game is gonna blow people away!
Everything is so wonderfully written, and natural, and fun to read. Excellent game, I will make a video of it on my channel soon as it was requested by a few people. Excellent work! I hope more people get to play this!
Wahh thank you so much! Your comment has literally left me in a puddle of my own tears right now ;v;
Even if you don't make a video for the demo, please feel free to share your channel here so I can watch your videos and support you as well! ♡
You're very welcome! This game is incredibly made and GORGEOUS! Here is my channel .
It is very silly and has many fictional boyfriends, I hope you enjoy it!
I have finally uploaded my playthrough! I broke it into about 3 parts that I'll upload every couple days cuz I hate making hour long videos, I hope you enjoy and that I've done your wonderful game justice! I will admit that I didn't record the 18+ option at ALL because Youtube scares me, but I played it on my own and OMGosh that is so beautifully written!! And the picture of Ren (fans self) LOVE IT!
I really enjoyed the game...
and with Ren.... Uhmm....
I really enjoyed the game! Looknng forward for further development!! :D
thank you!! ^^ ♡
I absolutely loved the demo!! Im so excited to see more, the game is very promising <3
i cant wait for the full update great game <3
Speechless! Literally speechless over how good this demo is! And it's very promising too
First of all, we are already given a variety of choices on how close we allow Ren to be, and I love it. Second, the art style is gorgeous and so well-made! Characters already all look quite unique. Third, I like the small details that you did. Like how different characters can say different thing, depending on what we wear (like when Ren is taken aback by MC wearing alternative style).
And of course Ren! Ren is just great. I am soooo interested to see different routes with him! I can't wait to see his reaction, once he realizes he got intimate with MC the next day :D Overall, this is a very good beginning, and I am just burning up with wait :P
Wahhh, thank you!! ♡ I'm glad to see that you were able to pick up on all the little titbits scattered throughout the demo, as well as the unique dialog for the styles you pick ^^ If I remember correctly; Violet will say something about your outfit if it's cute/trendy, Elanor will say something if it's professional/casual, and Ren will say something if it's alt/comfy
But thank you once again for your kind comment! I'm slowly chipping away at Day 2, so hopefully you won't have to wait long! ^^ ♡
EDIT: I can't spell lol
These kind of games are my guilty pleasure *chef kiss*, I can barely find games like these that have dark content; besides a few. this is really well made from my perspective, the art to the effort of branching out the paths (since vn are a pain in the ass to deal with, especially the coding part). Take your time making it, and don't rush it. But Ren exudes so much mystery, bcuz there are some parts got me thinking he might be more than what he seems on the surface and that he isn't from where I think he is supposedly.
pls recommend some similar games
aaaa thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed the demo! ;v; Honestly the branching paths were a pain for me to try and connect dialog-wise, since some choices wouldn't flow as seamlessly as the rest (i.e. the MC stating that they don't trust Ren, but then immediately choosing the option to share a bed with him like?? jkakfkd bestie do we trust him or not? LMAO) ^^'
But thanks again for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the demo! ♡
Wow, i want more of Ren! Loved the switch of personality and the art... reaaly good!! The smut part was very on point. Im very interested in how the story will go on. Cant wait the full 14 days!!
You did such a fantastic job with this, I'm really looking forward to seeing more!
when do you think the second day will be out? :D
I'm slowly working on it!! I can't make any promises but maaaaaybe in 2-3 weeks if I'm able to put aside enough time for it ^^ Creating sprites and writing dialog is a lot more time consuming than you'd think lol
I'll also be posting updates on twitter soon if you're interested in seeing the progress!
Absolutely loved this, can't wait to see what the future days have in store. You weren't lying about the eye straining text though, kinda leaves me with a bit of a headache at times 😅.
aaaa sorry to hear that >.< I can look into adjusting the font/text size/text jitter in the near future!! Can I ask what specifically made it difficult to read? Just so I'll know what to work on ^^
Thank you for your comment! ♡
OMG Ren is such a snack lol Love how desperate he is for MC’s love! Can’t wait for more things to come
SHEEEESH this is really good!! The art is SO pretty and Ren is, admittedly, very cute, despite the many red flags he raised LMAO and that sex scene is 69/10. But aside from Ren, Violet and Eleanor are really pretty! Too bad something bad will most likely happen to them :,)
I'm genuinely very excited for the finished game, I'll be wishing you all the best with the development! :D
ayooo 69/10?? NICE >:)
But thank you for your kind words and support!! It's nice to see people liking the other characters as well (sorry Ren lmao) ^^ Maybe I'll let them live... Maaaaaybe.
I'm an absolute sucker for yandere guys, and I feel there is so much to Ren! I've been looking for something like this, and it's done so well! You did an amazing job on the demo and I really hope to see more of this because I just have to know how this ends for MC <3 not to mention the backstory for Ren and your other characters lol
Thank you so much! ♡ I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed the demo! You'll be able to learn more about Ren and his backstory within the later parts of the game, so look out for that ^^
Much better than I was expecting! Thanks for sharing this with us, and I hope you find the time and motivation to finish it.
Thank you for making such a great game! Can't wait for the full game!
It's awesome!
ye
cant wait to see more from this game!
BLESS YOUR SOUL FOR THIS GAME . THANK YOU I LOVE IT SO FAR
BLESS YOUR SOUL FOR LEAVING THIS COMMENT ;v; ♡
HES SO ATTRACTIVE IM GONNA CRY
Looks absolutely amazing from the pictures! Really excited to play it!
(just editing this comment that previously stated I was having issues opening the game, but I've solved it! I was just a little dumb haha)
wahh thank you!! If you ran into any difficulties opening the game, feel free to let me know the specifics so I can update the instructions shown on the download page! ^^
Glad to hear that you got it working though! ♡
Amazing <3 I loved it. The art and UI is so pretty and Ren is so cute. They only problem I have with this game is that we're a bottom.
Gay people that prefer to bottom exist too, you know... And MC can be female here, so I am already very happy and very grateful that we are given opportunity to have different pronouns
that’s not what I was trying to imply… I was just kinda hoping that there was an option to switch but I still enjoy the game
Thank you so much!! I can definitely add a feature in the near future that lets you choose whether you want to top/bottom if people are interested in that ^^
Thank you for the suggestion, and apologies for the late reply!! ♡
I absolutely LOVE this game!! I cant wait for more updates!!
wahh thank you!! ;v; ♡
I have been looking for more stories similar to this for a while. There is not many of them out there, that's for sure. This story, I absolutely love it and cannot wait for the rest to be released. Good job and good luck on the rest!
I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the demo ^^ Thank you so much! ♡
Looking forward to future updates <3
ty!! ^^
I love this game already! The art, the music, the story (and Ren of course).
All the subtle details in conversations that might seem normal, but you just know they are not. How for some reason you feel so comfortable and safe with him from the start, despite not knowing anything about him.
Also caught an error when you choose share the bed -> call out/move the pillow -> never mind
Other than that, can't wait for a full release to spend all 14 days with Ren. Thank you so much for such a wonderful demo.
aaaaaAAAaa ;v; ♡
Thank you for your kind words — and for catching that error! I'm not sure how I missed it during playtesting ^^' But I'll be sure to take another look at the code and see if I can find/fix the problem ASAP. Thanks again!!
This is really good so far, I love it! I especially like the personality chosen for the MC and the mysterious vibes Ren gives off. Thank you so much for making it!
By the way, it's cool to meet someone with the same name. Only difference is that mine is taken from my alias Saikotic ^_~
Thank you!! ♡
And ayyyy Sai gang lessgoooo ^w^ Mine came from my alias Saint, but Saikotic sounds way cooler lol
Lol ty, yours is really awesome too! ^_^
AMAZING, INCREDIBLE, WONDERFUL, I AM OUT OF WORDS.
please im so in love my heart is so full i cant wait................. this is so good T^T !!! ren is..... wow. i mean, i already fell for him. how could i not????? the boy is a walking red flag but who cares??? from now on, im colorblind!
everything about this game is beautiful, the art, the ost, the colors... im totally in. take everything you want my beautiful dev, my soul, my money, everything is yours, i just want this game finished in my hands so i can finally be happy. now seriously, thank you so much for the hard work and for share this masterpiece with us, can't wait for the full thing! ♡_♡
LMAO WE ARE NO LONGER PERCEIVING COLOUR 😤✋ the red flag is now our national flag, and Ren—
But fr, thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the demo, and your support means the world to me :'D Day 2 should be out soon! I'm still working on the sprites and updating the old CG art since my art style has changed a lot since then :')
Thank you once again! ♡
OMG!!! This game is freaking WONDERFUL. Also Ren, he... he is so cute absolutely my type
Ren, somewhere in the background: All according to my plan >:)
Glad you enjoyed the demo! ^^ ♡
obsessed! Can't wait for more!
Thank you!! ♡
Just yes, yes, yes! It's so cool being early to a game I just know is going to be so special! CANT wait for the full release.
aaaaaa I'm cryinggg, thank you sm!! ;v; ♡
I LOVE THIS GAME and i find it funny how even tho I know completely that Ren is crazy obsessed with us (and is definitely the guy who broke into our house and is behind the recent murders in town...) I JUST CAN'T BE MEAN TO HIM OR REFUSE HIM HE'S SO IRRESISTIBLE 😫 LMFAO
And I find that the MCs ever changing opinion of him aligns with mine too somehow lmfao we're going from "damn he's kinda creepy" and then just forget all about it a second later and go "man he's so cute 😍" lmfao 😭
And that 18+ scene... 😳 IT WAS SO IN DEPTH HONESTLY I WAS SHOCKED BECAUSE I DON'T USUALLY SEE IN DEPTH ONES IN GAMES It was written so well I am in love! And that cg?!?!?! 😳
Overall, I COMPLETELY ADORE THIS GAME, The art is immaculate and the writing is so good! I am now also deeply enamored with Ren <3 I enjoyed this game so much and I'm looking forward to see more! <3
LMAOOOO MC went from "ew he's nasty" to "ayoo let's share a bed 😳" real fast AHDLFALSF HELP
But aaaaAAAAaA thank you for the kind words!! ♡ I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed playing the game! Day 2 should be out real soon ^^
I have been replaying the demo several times now because its just THAT good.
The game is really well writen and I love those small parts in the text that show how obsessive/possessive Ren is and...well... Ren is just too irresistible to say no to! I just can't wait till we have 14 days with just him!
aaaaaaa thank you so much!! ♡ I'm glad you were able to pick up on his subtle yandere tendencies! I was worried that it might've been too vague to notice -- but at the same time, I didn't want Ren to come on too strong with it lmao ^^'
I'm glad you enjoyed the demo though! Thank you for playing it!
You did just the perfect amount of Ren's yandere tendecies for the very first day (especially considering that he will become even more obvious yandere in the upcoming days)
You did a trully wonderfull job, and thank you for your hard work! ღゝ◡╹)ノ♡
Holy moly
me every time someone leaves a review for this demo lol
ABSOLUTE PERFECTION I THINK MY SPIRIT LEFT MY BODY AFTER THAT +18 SCENE WITH REN
I'm ready to forgive him anything, this man can do no wrong, I'm great at burying bodies
In a more serious note, amazing demo. I'm dying to play the full game, whenever that is!
KFAJFA THE BURYING BODIES COMMENT TOOK ME OUT LMAO
But I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the demo! Thank you for your support! ♡