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Hello, I played the demo and I love your art style, also, your GUI is so unique, I love it!! Like the sticky note thing where you can move it around?? Genius!! And also the social media screen, though, I'm still kinda confused with the meaning of colors and all that, but since it's still WIP so maybe it will be explained in the future update?

NEXT ONE IS PROBABLY WILL CONTAIN SPOILER, so read at your own risk...












As for the story, so far I enjoyed it!! There's an inconsistency in the NSFW scene on day 1, where MC tells Ren that it's their first time too but then in the next one, MC's monologue says that Ren is bigger than anything else they've ever taken... Where do they get experience from if Ren is their first time lol?? It's nothing major but it's just funny to me.

And I was wondering why when I rejected Theo's invite ended as a bad end...? Since in my perspective, I don't feel comfortable around Theo, as much as I like Elanor, I don't feel the need to force myself to be around Theo even though being around Ren is much more dangerous knowing how he is lol... So... I thought rejecting would be a good choice but then that came to bite back me with the jumpscare xD 

So Ren, don't come to me and be jealous since this is also your fault, I have to accept Theo's invitation just to avoid your jumpscare. It would be funnier if there's an option "Fine. But I'm doing this for my own sanity." after I got the jumpscare end xD

Lastly, this is unrelated to the story, but I'm also on my way to making my own game with Renpy and I'm stuck on making a screen of player name input like yours. I wonder if you have any tips regarding that or any GUI-related on renpy? Or you can ignore this question since I don't want to burden or force anyone (^^;;)

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Hiya!! Thank you so much for the kind review! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed playing Day 3 β™‘

As for the NSFW inconsistency: I've actually explained this here on Tumblr (cw for descriptive NSFW talk), but the tl;dr is that Angel might've used toys on themselves prior to sleeping with someone for the first time — also, they literally had Ren's fingers inside them moments before, which obviously wouldn't be bigger than his... y'know.... ^^

For the "Dead End" in Day 3: Also explained here on Tumblr! Despite there being a ton of choices available for the player, the overall storyline for 14DWY is extremely linear and follows a strict path. I'd have no way of connecting the plot of Day 4 with Day 3 since it requires you to go on Teo's date. If Angel didn't agree, Day 4 would just be them sitting around at home all day — which would be boring to read about from a player's standpoint ^^;

You do, however, get three different Dead End scenes depending on how many times you get them! Ren says something different each time, which I thought would make things more interesting and "worth" getting the Dead Ends lmao

I'd also be more than happy to help you with any dev/Ren'Py related topics!! You're always welcome to ask your questions on my personal Tumblr (since it's not exactly 14DWY related fjsdjghs)!

Now that you have explained it, it makes sense. I'm sorry I haven't tried to search on your Tumblr before I commented, but thank you for explaining it again! ^^ I really appreciated it!! And also thank you for the warm welcome, I will do that when I working on my game again! ^^

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I LOVE this game. I'm not even done yet (currntly on day 1) but the nsfw scene during day 1 kinda made my jaw drop?? I've never played a visual novel before with a nsfw scene but I'm definetely NOT disapppointed. Great work and the artstyle is so so cute!

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GASPPPP I'm on day 2 now and oh em gee?? When I saw Teo my jaw dropped bc he's literally my type visually but then the mc said he cheated on us and I got the ICK. Anyways the store employee also got on my nerves :( Idk she just couldn't take a hint. But the story is cute and fun so far :3

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Hehe I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^^ It was also my first time writing an NSFW scene period, so I'm happy to hear that it wasn't terrible sdhjgsdhj

I just wanna quickly clarify that Teo never cheated on Angel! He explicitly states that they were never exclusive, and Angel was the one who read a little too much into his actions ^^;

Also yeah, Olivia is kinda annoying at first — but she might become redeemable in future days! Thanks again for the review!!

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this man (Ren) is such a red flag but he's got me squealing, blushing, head in my hands nd kicking my feet omfg… TT




(spoilers ahead just in case,,)



i screamed SO LOUD when i saw the new Ren cg of him in the manga store— THE PONYTAIL? THE BLACK MASK?? AQGWHKRQQXN????? 

simpery aside, I love the brief traces of [REDACTED] peeking out from behind the Ren facade… it's subtle, but thats what makes it even more entertaining when he does slip up. be it the curse words, his stuttering suddenly disappearing, the staggering boldness that contrasts with the timidness of his ren persona….. and that motorcycle??? Ren's true personality showing through never fails to make me giddy, it's so cool

honestly,, i can't wait for Ren to get fully comfortable with mc and seeing his [REDACTED] side 24/7 haha, the fact that I (as the player, not the char of mc) am aware that he's a 🚩 but am just letting myself be taken by him is…. hes too cute i cant ;;;;

btw, i just had to mention how much Teo got me clenching my pillow but like not in a good way, literally was YELLING at my screen for Elanor to RUN— ik im being a hypocrite for accepting Ren's toxic traits and not Teo's but Elanor deserves SO much better than this prick…… idk if the 'i can fix him' mindset can work this time… no, the fact that elanor doesnt even know he's like THAT at this point of time……

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(spoiler warning again, don't read if u dont want to get spoiled by more of my ramblings HAHA)







also, the reactions of some other charas (specifically Teo and Conan when you call them up) has me wondering if there'll be love interests besides Ren? the 'sweetheart' nickname-drop from conan (i gasped) and teo's words alluding to him wanting mc to be jealous ab him… ig in a way both can be justified as being non-romantic, esp in the case of the latter with the reasoning that maybe he just gets a sick kick out of making mc jealous

thinking ab it, this has probably been asked before….. maybe this is my sign to finally check out the tumblr for 14dwy ^^;

oh right, i wanted to point out a spelling mistake i caught in the nsfw scene of day 2, where the word pleasure-filled is misspelled as 'pleasure-filed', so yeah ^^

i only just realized how far this has comment gone haha;; sorry for all the text dump & rambling, i'm just so invested in this game and everything the release of day 3 has brought— from the designs of kiara and moth to the new ui feature (hope mc gets an editable one too!) and the cute sticky note easter egg and the option to customize ren's hair length aaaaaa i love this game sm TT

i hope day 4 goes well with the double date, who knows how ren'll get watching mc on a 'date' with leon (from the sidelines, I'm sure); other than that, happy belated new year, and here's to having a great rest of 2024 ^^ I guess i'll go check out the tunblr now HAHA

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aaaaaa thank you so much for leaving this lovely review!! β™‘ I love reading through da longer comments and seeing everyone's reactions to things :3 /gen

As for potential love interests (Teo and Conan): Ren is the main and only love interest for 14DWY — he's my red flag poster child lmao — but you will be able to get "romantic" endings with some of the other characters as well! However, it'll only be implied through the dialogue, and no one will be getting a fully fleshed-out "route" like Ren ^^; Mayhaps as a DLC in the far future?

And thank you for pointing out the spelling mistake!! It'll be fixed for the next update. I can also look into adding a customisable "status update" for Angel as well... We'll see >:3c

But thank you so much for the kind words and review!! I'm glad you enjoyed playing Day 3, and I hope you'll enjoy Day 4 just as much β™‘

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AHH I CANT BELIEVE IM LATE BUT IM SO EXCITED PLAYING THE DAY 3 UPDATE!! Thank you for all of your efforts really!! <3

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Hehe thank you for checking out Day 3!! I hope you enjoy playing it ^^

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Good so far!

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aaaa thank you for playing Day 3 and making a video on it!! Listening to your theories at the end got me like πŸ‘€πŸ˜Ό lmao

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Wish i could play the new update sadly no android download 😒

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aaaaa I'm sorry to hear that!! Unfortunately, my main priority is creating builds for PC/Mac right now (since other platforms would mean creating a bigger workload for me) ^^;

Maybe in the future, though!

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How close is the future 😫

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Like maybe 2 but not more than 40919

(I genuinely can't give you an exact answer seeing as, again, I currently don't have any plans for creating an Android version >.<)

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Always the iOs ☹️

I have no plans on making an ios version either T_T

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I'm in love with this game, your writing, and, of course, Ren. The day 3 scene when Ren gets possessive/dominant made me blush in real life xD I need to check your Tumblr to understand who this [Redacted] is, but if that's just a taste, I'm already addicted. The little changes in his dialogue and facial expressions convey so well what we, the readers, can see from the first meeting: Ren is hiding or changing some part of who he is. 

Also love all (well, except Teo) the supporting characters! Especially the girls β€οΈ

Thank you for sharing your talent. You have a new loyal follower amongst a sea of others.

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Wahhhh this is such a high praise!! Thank you so much! ;v;

There is absolutely no pressure to check out Tumblr, but it's definitely the best place to learn more about [REDACTED], the other characters, and the lore surrounding 14DWY if that interests you!! I also have a lot of fun interacting with the community over there ^^

Thank you again for the kind words! I'll be sure to give all da characters (NOT TEO!!!!) some love β™‘

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Despite playing a lot of Visual Novels in my life i never dared to go to yandere ones.
BUT BOY I DONT REGRET MY CHOICE!!

This was honestly so good the writing is so well done along with the charachter art and story. I didnt expect to like Ren as much as I do honestly but here we are and I am not mad about it.

Granted I got the dead end at day three but I replayed some choices and maaged to fix it!

I am excited to follow this game and see what comes next and honestly can't wait for more.

Ig thats my clue to check out the tumblr isnt it?

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Woahhhhh?? Thank you so much for this lovely review! I'm honoured to be your gateway into the yandere rabbit hole!! >:3c

And I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed Ren/14DWY in general! If you do end up checking out Tumblr, I hope you have a fun time ^^ There are... a lot of posts over there (I don't shut up about Ren, lmao), but hopefully the tags will help you find the things you're looking for!

Thank you again for the support, and I hope you have a wonderful day β™‘

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Ren and his real persona are so HHHHOOOOTTTT EOYYRFFAUAGTDIAAASEOBU.....His real character is such a Dom Beast, ima luv his energy. Need more of real Ren gaaahhhhh!!!!

Btw just noticed we can change Ren’s hair. Very cool extra customization :D his new short hair gotta be my fav

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Thank you so much!! I'm happy to hear you liked da demo (and [REDACTED] lmaoooo) β™‘

I'm pretty partial to his normal hair length, but his short hair is definitely a close contender!! I'm glad you like the new feature ^^

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Hi sorry, can anyone help me? In the nsfw scene there is a choice of genitalia, I'm confused which one should I choose if I'm interested in males? I'm girl btw

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There is no option to choose Ren's private parts, so you're essentially choosing your own genitalia in the character customisation screen!!

You can also change it at any time via the "⚠" icon at the top left of the screen (next to the current Day)!

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Hello i was wondering does anyone know what are those marks on Ren hand?

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Burn marks!! I've alluded to them in the past (on Tumblr), but I haven't confirmed anything "official" yet! If you're interested, you can learn more about them on my Tumblr ^^

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Oh burn marks! Thanks for answering, I'll definitely go check your tumblr to learn more!

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i'm crying (there are tears between my legs LMAOOOO) with how good this game is. IT WAS SUCH A WORTHWHILE WAITING FOR DAY THREE LIKEEEE.... CUTIESAI SERVIN US AGAIN????? AND WITH REN BEIN THIS POSSESSIVE AND DOMINANT? HELL YEAH, I'LL TAKE IT. I already can't wait for day 4 but at the same time, I can so take your time kween. AMAZING GAME, AMAZING WRITING, AS ALWAYS. 10/10??? UNDERSTATEMENT, THIS GAME IS FANTASTIC (and helps with my delusion, thank u<333) I'm still recovering from that amazing gameplay so I will be doing the other endings later..... MORE TIME FOR ME TO PLAY, YIPEEEEE!!!!

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Sometimes delulu girl dinner is letting Ren show a hint of his [REDACTED] side πŸ˜Ό It's like a Victorian man seeing bare ankles for the first time /silly

But on a more serious note, I'm glad you enjoyed Day 3/the demo!! Thank you for your support and your patience for the rest of the days! I hope it'll be worth the wait ^^

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I WAS JUST PLAYING, AND I WAS ABOUT TO GET THE BAD ENDING AND IT GLITCHED OUT AND MY PC BROKE DOWN. IS THAT SUPPOSED TO BE IN THE GAME, AND MY PC WAS NOT WORKING FOR THE NEXT HOUR, I SWEAR TO GOD 

IS THAT SUPPOSED TO BE IN THE GAME!!??!?

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the same thing happened to me when i played one of the easter eggs LOL but it was more like my PC shutting down for a bit and then opening up again after a few seconds

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THE FACT THAT IT HAPPENED TWICE WITH DIFFERENT PEOPLE?? LOL

The glitchy text is supposed to happen, but that's about it... ^^; Maybe it's a sign for y'all to get your computers checked out sghsdjgjsh

My computer is like tots fine idk what happened, omg ren is spreading a virus on our pc :sob:

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finally..my desires had been fed. DAY 3 MADE ME FEEL HOLY. Renny boy my love! tysm for your hard work @cutiesai! love the artworks honestly. I CANNOT WAIT FOR DAY 4 OR MAYBE WHEN THE GAME IS FINALLY FNISHED !! take your time babes! its better to taking your time than to hurrying it up since a timed game is better than a hurried game :33


REN MAKES MY HEART DOKIDOKI --

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AAAAA THANK YOU FOR DA KIND WORDS!! I'll do my best for Day 4 🫑🩷

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Im replaying the game after a long the, the last time I played there was only day1, i got the nsfw scene then but i cant seem to get it now??? how do i get it pls i tried everything T.T

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In Day 1: Invite Ren over
In Day 2: Go to Ren's place
In Day 3: Invite Ren over (again)

You'll need to get the NSFW scene in Day 1 to get the rest of them!!

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Im talking about the scene in day1 , sorry if I made it unclear

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You just need to invite Ren over to your place in Day 1!! ^^ (and make sure the NSFW/18+ option is enabled at the beginning of the game!)

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Thank youuu, I didnt have the nsfw option enabled... im dum

LOL it happens, don't worry ^^

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For android when 😭😭

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you could try using Joiplay but idk if it would work 

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I'm very sorry, but I currently don't have any plans to make an android/mobile version!! >.<

:(

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Day 3 dropped with great timing to keep me occupied while home sick. Thanks! Interesting to see all the new little details added, even in earlier chapters. And the little sticky note on the load screen is a nice touch of both cute and creepy, especially once I realized it could move... Yikes. 

Not sure if you've noticed/had it pointed out yet, but there's a spelling error on day 3's dead end route- when you get home, "shrugging" off your jacket is spelled "shurgging".  Also, I deleted the last version's files, at least I thought I got them all, but the old saves still showed up when I loaded up the new game. I liked the little touch of Ren welcoming us back if we used the same name as before, but I'm wondering where the backup saves might be getting created?

Anyways, this new update was fun to see play out in its different iterations. Makes me a little sad to realize each update comes every 6 months or so, and how long the last day might be in coming at that rate, but I know VNs are a lot of work, especially for one person. This one is legitimately good and I'm curious to see how this waiting trainwreck of a situation unfolds. Keep up the great work, please and thank you! And have a great 2024.

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Hiya! ^^ Thank you so much for the lovely and honest review!! (I'm also happy to see that you noticed the sticky note secret >:3c) β™‘

I wasn't aware of the incorrect spelling of "shrugging", but it's now been fixed and ready for the next update. So thank you for bringing it to my attention! As for the save files, Ren'Py stores them in a separate folder from 14DWY (usually in "%APPDATA%/RenPy/14DaysWithYou" for PC and "~/Library/RenPy/14DaysWithYou" for Mac), which you can freely delete (or move to your desktop if you want to be safe)!

As for the updates coming out very sporadically, there's unfortunately very little I can do about it ^^; I'm a full-time student with a part-time job and art as my main hobby, so 14DWY has always been a fun little passion project for me. I had no idea that it would become this popular, and had I known, I definitely would've done things differently and planned a better schedule. But I genuinely appreciate your understanding and patience!

Happy New Year and I hope 2024 will be kind to you ^^

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Day 3 was just amazing and 100001% worth the wait! Thank you for posting it here so soon. It was a lovely New Year present! (●´░`)β™‘



[Will be some spoilers here, so anyone reading, make sure to avoid if you don't want to get spoiled!!!]



Honestly, I enjoyed all of it so much! Even MORE of [Redacted] and his true colors (that was very HOT and HEATED omg >/////<. Once we get to see him fully in HD, we are going to explode ig). I like a lot how the real [Redacted] is domineering/possessive, and whenever Ren was gentle-direct, he was being genuine. Him cursing more in this day, and even having a different way of speaking was a really cool detail!! I wonder what would happen if we betrayed his trust and looked at him while he was shirtless….and now just can’t wait for a day we see [Redacted]’s tattoos, and tell him how hot he is with them lol

 Anyway, I loved that we finally saw more of real [Redacted], he just stole the scene! 

Also Day 4 is planning to be something interesting and I am all for it! We must protect Elanor at all costs and get rid of Teo….hopefully Ren can help us with that^^

Have a happy New Year οΈβ˜ƒοΈ Hope 2024 will be a great year for you

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can tell me how to get that "scene" what options do i choose?

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Let's see...if you just want to see Ren cursing, I think you need to simply spend the night at his place during Day 2.

And to get a [Redacted] XXX scene (def not called like this, but it's the closest to his "scene" that we have currently lol) , you must get intimate with Ren during both Day 1 and Day 2. Then during Day 3 you will have the option "to sit on Ren's lap" once you invite him over.

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thanks

how do you get intimate with Ren on day2? 

1) You must get intimate with Ren during Day 1. 2) Go to Ren's place when there is an option given. 3) Later select option "Can you sleep in my bed tonight?"

Also all the intimate choices have the (+18!) label, to make them distinguishable. 

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Wahhh thank you! I genuinely enjoy seeing reviews like these ^^ β™‘

There's definitely a lot of [REDACTED] and Glitch!Ren in Day 3 hehe >:3 But I'm glad that you were able to pick up on Ren/[REDACTED]'s subtle changes! He definitely is getting more comfortable around Angel — especially during the spicy scenes lmao

But again, thank you for your comment and support! I hope you have a wonderful 2024 as well!! ^^

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day 3 IS AMAZING!!! REN IS AMAZING!!!! pls tell him i love him sm :333

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aaaa thank you!! Ren says he loves you too lmao β™‘

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i love ren so much AAAAAAAAAAAAARRRGHHHH (can't wait for day 3)

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Surprise shawty 😼

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The game is really amazing I love it, but I have a doubt if at some point there will be a Spanish version since several of the users are Hispanic (including me), personally it is a little difficult.

Thank you for your attention and greetings from one more fan.

<33

 

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Hello!! I do actually have plans on creating a Spanish version in the future, but it's currently on hold because I constantly keep making changes to the dialogue in Days 1-3. Because of this, it would only be a pain for translators to keep updating ^^;

Thanks for your support!

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THIS WAS REALLY GREAT 🌹 I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT DAYS :3

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BEST GAME EVER CANT WAIT FOR DAY 3!!!!

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The game is so good1!1!1!1! I cant wait for day 3 to come out :3 (i can wait)

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Thank you for your support and patience! I hope Day 3 will be worth the wait ^^

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Thank you very much for the kind words!! β™‘

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when ren is just so [REDACTED] it makes me get all silly goofy inside

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LMAOOOOKGDSJGJK I'm happy to hear you like Ren/[REDACTED]!! ^^

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Played the demo! I loved it! It was a nice little demo and it left me wanting more and more! I will keep my eyes on this one! <3


Wahhh thank you so much for all the support — and for making a video on my silly lil demo! β™‘

I've watched all of part 1 and some of part 2 so far, and I looooove your commentary (and reaction to Teo gdshjghj)!! Also I love your vtuber design!!

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live laugh love rennnn!!!!!!!

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[REVOKE] [RETAIN] [REDACTED] β™‘

(thank you for the comment!! It made me laugh hdgssa ;v;)

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I know it mightve been asked but I was wondering if youd ever give the option for the mc to have top surgery done in character creation? idk why I just love Ren/Red alot and Id feel so happy if we had the option since he feels insecure? About his chest like me with my dysphoria, its just been a scene in my head ever since I played the game for a long time and its very comforting to me.

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OMG I LOVE THAT IDEA

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aaaaa I don't have any scenes planned where Ren (or the MC) will talk about their chests in great detail, but this is definitely something I can keep in mind for future updates!

Also!! I'd like to quickly clarify that Ren isn't insecure about his own chest or anything — just his arms and the scars that cover them! But if I've misunderstood your comment, feel free to let me know^^

small edit: I'm not sure why folks are downvoting this?? T_T Regardless, please don't let this discourage you from sharing suggestions in the future! I really appreciate your kind words and for sharing something so personal with me!! /gen

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Transphobia transcends even into Interactive Fiction unfortunately, thank you for the consideration and reply

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i love this totally normal game about a very normal guy who is very very normal πŸ‘

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Just a normal silly guy doin normal silly things 🫢 (I'm glad to hear you like Ren!!)

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I love all the woohoo scenes, like if you give me the option might as well. Good job on day 3!!

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Hehe thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it!! β™‘

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aahhhhhh this is soo good, cant wait to play day 3!!!!

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Thank you for your patience!! ^^

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A la vaina yo estaba bien normal hasta que vi que hay puro man que habla InglΓ©s.

yo me meti aca para practicar ingles xddd

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when hes a 10 but your coworkers gone missing

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He's a 10 but he wears two layers of sweaters during summer /silly

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HES SUCH A SILLY BOY..!!! I LOVE CASPER and its fucking amazing because my names jasper and im called capser!!!!!!!

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cool

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I don't know who Casper is but I love that for you β™‘

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I hope you are not overtired, don't forget to rest!! tysm for the game, redacted, and renren(⁠^⁠^⁠)

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Thank you for the kind words!! ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed the demo (and Renren!)

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This game will be able to android? :(

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Try an app called Joiplay. You'll have to find the version that works for your phone, though.

Unfortunately, no. My main focus is on Windows, MacOS, and Linux right now >.<

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oh how sad :(, but the game looks wonderful and quite beautiful even though I can't play your game it's great and has a future good luck :D

aaaaaa thank you so much!! There are quite a few YouTube playthroughs of 14DWY if you're interested in that (and still unable to play)! ^^

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I ADORE yandere games where we get to be into the yandere. I like to play characters as myself in fictional scenarios and I'm not big on playing the victim. Plus this guy... I bloody love him so much in every route. I kinda hope we'll get to see him be his authentic self in later days. Esp if we slept with him straight out.

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Wahhhh I'm glad you enjoyed the demo (and Ren)!! ^^ β™‘ I don't have any plans on developing the NSFW route right now, but I can definitely keep this in mind in the future!

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I really really liked the game and the yandere personality the scenario 10 of 10 goosh^^ but unfortunately,It's hard to find quality games like this especially for womens or interested in quality horror/love type of games personas.Thank you for your hardwork I'll keep in touch for the news only for this game LoL

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Not related to this game but i highly recommend particles of reality as it is similar to this game if you are interested!

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Aww thank you so much I was looking for games ( T_T) 

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Thank you for the kind words!! ;v; I'm following a bunch of talented game devs who've created similar-styled VN's on Twitter if you're interested in checking them out!!

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Thank u so much.It will help me a lot  ^^

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I am really excited to see where this story goes. 

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