For example us flipping out for waiting 20 minutes and just us being too paranoid when he was talking to that woman. In the route where you were a couple with Teo it does make sense since you kinda explained why we act that way because Teo treated us badly. 

In the other ones we are just making stuff up without proper reasons and already act as if we actually know a guy who we barley talked to in those two days. Like pointing out too much of his behavior even tho we barley know him to know if he is faking it. I just think it's not that realistic to kinda "obsess" too much on his switching behavior in this extent since he could just be logically be shy around the person they like but be a confident guy in general. I just think we kinda analyzed like some sort of therapist lol not like a non one.

Again maybe there could be a reason and obviously we know that Ren isn't an unproblematic guy but it's kinda weird when the MC does want to meet up but at the same time doubt everything about him. Not referring to him guessing our favorite food since that does make sense of us being suspicious. Our behavior is just kinda TOO contradictory and gives kind of "hot and cold" vibes. Like being really trusting to a guy we just met but at the same time not at all?. 

It's also difficult to grasp the relationship of them if we say "x" but think "y" it kinda makes the MC unlikeable because again they don't know Ren like we do (we know he is a Yandere). Again us being too paranoid but again at the same time not. We are also kinda "leading him on" with that behavior which is not really in my opinion a nice thing to do (again i'm saying that with the knowledge the MC has not us the player). 

Maybe that was the intention to make us be more irrational because if we actually act like people who doesn't trust the person we wouldn't hang out with them (we as a player have no choice unless we want to get the bad ending but the MC doesn't know that. And that is what makes them feel like they really trust him by wanting to meet up and even have the option to go to his place but again we are at the same time too untrusting for us to seem like either a paranoid person or a naive one.)

That's at least what makes them for me a little too judgy and kinda dramatic. But again that may be your intentions. We at day one seem to be somewhat more reasonable and "typical" with our thoughts so i kinda noticed our change in behavior or maybe they were also being this paranoid and it continued on and on day two we as the player see more of the MC's naive way i guess? (Again us being paranoid makes sense just us being too contradictory with our thoughts and decisions not. At least not for me but maybe there are actual people out there like that)

I just shared my thoughts if you were curious on how other people perceived the MC. I don't really suggested change just wanted to share my perspective ^^

Oh and sorry if my english is kinda awkward lol

No worries, asking questions is good :)

Intersex communities and societies recommend against using the term for several reasons and these two sources might answer your questions better than I can. I also sought advice from my intersex friends before gathering some references to share. I'm not sure if those who advised for the other term were part of the community or not, but it's very strongly discussed within the intersex and intersectionally inclusive academic spaces.

 General information on the term: https://isna.org/faq/hermaphrodite 

Short pdf 'How to be an Intersex Ally': https://madeinheene.hee.nhs.uk/Portals/0/Intersex%20ally%20guidance.pdf

Hope that helps. :)